Dear Thomas I am sending some suggestions to inprove LTE coverage measurements document.
1. suggestion:
add after line 43 in Executive summary:
subject: there exists combination in issued real obligations. e.g.: combination percentage of population and minimal speed of download and upload
2. suggestion:
change on lines 120 and 121 in Introduction on page 7:
„they are controlled and assessed“ with „is verified and assessed their fulfilments“
subject: unification of expression in full document
3. suggestion:
append on the end of sentence on line 143 on page 7:
„or their combinations“ to the: „...specified service quality or populations and area coverage“
subject: see 1st. suggestion
4. suggestion:
replace on line 152 on page 8:
„stationary“ with „fixed“
subject: unification of expression with other technical documentation
5. suggestion:
replace on line 180 on page 10
„(7 OFDM symbols)“ with „(6 or 7 OFDM symbols, depending on lenght of CP)„
subject: whichever CP is used still duration of a slot is 0.5 ms
6. suggestion:
remove from line 195 on page 10:
„be taken from the network provider or “
subject: 1. if this is not as a condition in obligation, may be law problem to get it from operator
2. regulator must be possible made such measurement
7. suggestion:
repair word functionality to functionality
8. suggestion:
on page 12:
The following to the considered as coverage obligations:
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Being able to log on to the network; (this is absolutely standard function of every network from gsm time and it is function of user rights /registered in SIM/ and signal level on antenna of UE and on this sequence. For users it is irrelevant, they want as best as QoS.) Here may be added that user want be able be log on and get connection with certain throughput at home. Not on streets,
The first two stages can be achieved with relatively low signal quality. However, they are not sufficient for the customer to make practical use of the system. - This is relative. For fast to get emails you do not need much of throughput, except these with big attachments.
9. suggestion:
on line 219
replace „computerised“ with „software“
subject: use rights words
10. suggestion:
line 233 page 12:
replace by in sentence „is often modelled by an omnidirectional“
with as like „is often modelled as an omnidirectional“
subject:
11.suggestion:
line 254 on page 13:
replace „html “ for „web“
subject: html is more technology, and web is commonly used as view web pages a so these days are other technology used for creating web pages, no pure html.
Mgr. Juraj Tőkőly
Úrad pre reguláciu elektronických komunikácií a poštových služieb
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